Such a handsome man
Though cold and sinister
Whispering to me
His toxic words
Tempting me
To kiss his dead lips
And join him in death
Author notes
Prompt 'Toxic Whispers' 30 words
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie! 10x30x30 by Twins 4 me.
450 points, ended August 3, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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spoooooky.lol.i love it.total commitment and loyalty till the end.^^great wording.
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wow
this is short,and strong...very nice delivery,and powerful choice of words...thumbs up!!!! -
His toxic words
Tempting me
To kiss his dead lips
And join him in death
they might be very tempting to me right now just to give him that welcome kiss
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Very creepy, lol, are you counting your title in the count, I hope I didn't do my wrong, best of luck!
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This is good, very creepy. Thanks for entering!
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Great take on the prompt.
I like it. Good luck!
FallenPoeticAngel
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ooooooooooooooo.good penning...
Good Luck
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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