Once,
there was a farie.
Her name was Carrie;
she really was Mery.
She lived in a cloud,
so she was really proud.
One day,
she was picking flowers,
then,
out of nowhere,
she heard this,
weird,
mysterious voice.
It said:
Come to me,
let me strangle you,
let me KILL you.
Then,
on one of the flowers,
she saw some writing,
it said:
go to the castle:
drop a pedal,
at the door;
on the floor.
then go to the king
leave a note,
saying the mysterious voice.
In the dartest black letters
you can find.
So Carrie did that.
She got a letter
back,
it said:
You found the
mysterious flower!
It showed up
exatly 100 years ago.
This exat same thing happend
100 years ago.
You have 1,000 more points on AP.
Congrats!
-The King-
A contest entry
- Show me what you have by Horseartist7.
600 points, ended August 17, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fairies! by Lorien.
520 points, ended February 29, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh wow I like it
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Here are your points!
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I think this your best Poem Yet!
!!!!!!!!!!! I love it
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thanks!!!!!!
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the best i've read!
i think it was very very very very good it was like you were reading us a story...good luck hope you win!
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thank you,thank you sooooooooooo much!
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Really good poem!
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That's awesome Cassidy!
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