To the other side of the country
Is your great distance from me
California across to Delaware
Our seperation doesn't seem fair
With every green hat I think of you
And know that you miss me too
We are connected under the same sky
But I want to see you eye to eye
Time makes it hard to keep in touch
It doesn't matter, I like you so much
Although mountains and plains keep us apart
You will always be next to my heart
Please tell me what you think
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long distance stuff sucks. its a good write. Problem is sometimes it feels like you are forcing each stanza while trying to rhyme. Once you grow out of that old habit of having to rhyme things will appear much smoother.
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Well, my latest poem doesn't rhyme.
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Lies! Rhyming rocks.
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W00t! I have one person on my side!
Viva rhyming! Yay! -
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VIVA LA RHYMALUCION!
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Yay rhymalucion. That is such a cool word. I think we need to T-shirts
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I think we need T-shirts too! They'd be awesome! With an accent on the "o," though.
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Aww...
So sweet, Shayna...
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