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Real Emotion

You are such a beautiful sight.
You make me want to spread wings and take flight.
I would take you with me into the night
And together we would watch the stars twinkle white.

I have always loved you with all my heart.
I even loved you from the start.
So, I will tell you in this art.
I never ever wanted to be apart.

We belong together in every way.
I only think about you everyday.
I am not here to leave you, I'm here to stay.
The grass beneath us, under the stars we lay.

I never thought we wouldn't be together.
Something always told me it would be forever.
So now I make another endeavor
To say I love you whenever.

You make me feel every emotion.
In my head, you cause so much comotion
Again I make another notion
To jump start us into motion.

Please tell me what you think

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  • lady8
    August 3, 2007

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    A very cute poem I hope you can set the wheels into motion.Had a nice flow with the words you chose to use.