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Untimely Death?

A chill in the air, a pale lunar glow
Setting the scene, for darkness to grow
Relesing the rage, harnes my wrath
Demons defie any light in our path

Consume all with darkness, head by my pain
Clouds dripping blood, fall mixed in the rain
And fear no abyss, conjure by death
Powered by light, of darkness's breath

Solaris is waiting for her sister to kill
Lunaris is fadeing, to administrative will
Destruction and Dream, still battle for power
Dynasty and Death, still wait in their towers

The sisters of fate, being in a state
Irritable, tired, hateing the wait
A man marked by death, unknown to him
Walks the night air, breaths out his sin

His aura is darkened, yet somehow still bright
They say that an aura, glows most when in fright
From a bringer of death, that follows you here
Stalking and preying on all of your fear

Seeing him first, she motions her sister
'I see him Solaris,' she says in a whisper
His mortal purpos, was soon cut short
By Lunaris, who quickly returned to her fort

'I hate this job' she says with discust
'I wish i could quit, but I know that I must
Continue, killing for purposes higher
But this mortal, he was simply a lier

He did no great evil, why must he die!'
'You can't go on, always asking why'
The words of her sister, helped her ease
the pain of killing, and doing such deeds

Author notes

a story in poetic form from the characters of my dreams

to be continued..

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  • Jalalbad gold member
    August 5, 2007

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    I thought I read the best

    until I read this, and I believe the best is yet to come. You are a clever writer, not only clever but deep. You have a brain.
    smile,
    Judy


  • OktoberSchatten
    August 5, 2007

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    your atyle is just so intoxicating. I love it! I adore how it's put into story form, and your words just flow together so beautifuly. Can't wait to read more!


  • moon2u
    August 4, 2007

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    INTERESTING DREAMS MR!

    WELL I LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE CUSTOMIZED YOUR POEMS
    TO INTERTWINE! VERY CREATIVE
    AND YOU SAY IT IS FROM A DREAM...WHICH IS ALWAYS AN INTERESTING READ I FIND!
    I REALLY LIKE IT!
    HUGS MOONY