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a Mother to Her Dead Child

The moon is webbed with dreams,
Dark leaves fringe in the mist, and on the scarp
The braided sheaves stand in their stook-fast lanes.
Somewhere below the mist,
Hidden by stubble slopes, is a valley lake,
Circle of pattering leaves and a brown-stone stream.
And only now I hear,

Under the slopes of mist and the stiff grey wheat,

Your voice, beyond words, beyond blood, like a midnight star

That draws me through the mist,

Under the wheat-fields, down to the moon-black trees,

To clasp you in the dark to my empty heart.

 

My little child, lie still,

There in the cradle of my memories.

Sunshine and laughing music I have planned

For you, beyond all dreams,

Larksong and honey scent of summer air...

And you will rest, and I shall come to you

After your long day's sleep.

And we shall smile together; we shall say:

"How long it is! How long!" and "Mother dear,

Just see how I have grown!"

"No, little girl, you are my baby still"...

And we shall play away the aching years...

 

My little one, be still...

Or I shall wander to you down the slopes

Through the stiff tented sheaves, and quietly

Dissolve into the mist...

And it would be white song in a moon-pearl world,

Clasped quiet, wreathed in chaplets of dark-eyed daisies,

And wandering at peace

Over pearl meadows of forgetfulness,

Untouched by echoes of the coloured world...

 

My daughter, do not call!...

Lie quiet in your sunshine, do not walk

At night, between the mist and the moon-tipped leaves,

But spin bright-sparkled dreams,

And in a little while I'll come to you -

Not through the magic gate of misted moon

But bright in sunlit flowers...

Be patient, little daughter, in your dreams,

And I shall hammer God in relentless prayer:

 

"Lord, send her back to me!

Her soul was but the dart of a frail white bird.

Uncaught by man, winged back to its Creator...

O God of endless might,

Busy among the stars, the granite peaks,

The snowstorms and the roar of eternal waters,

Thay, Who hast all to do,

To forge wild comets, chisel crystal faces,

And work the secret things of the spinning atoms,

Leave this one thing undone,

Release her life again, send back her soul

That she may wake once more in a second birth,

And clasped in fragile flesh,

Another - yet the same - sleep in my arms,

And grow, a flower fashioned for Thy glory!"

 

 

My child, too young to name,

Rest a while longer, till the sunshine breaks

Into a thousand rainbows, and I call

You home into my arms.

Hush your dim weeping in the misted woods,

I shall not come tonight. So close your eyes

And dream of rising stars...

I shall not come tonight, nor any night,

But in the morning you shall come to me.

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  • I love the imagry youve used in this poem, the tender words pulls at my heartstrings as well. Although never with such an elaborate setting I have had the same dreams. ASking god to return to me what I'd lost. Thank you for entering the beautiful poem in my contest and good luck.


  • daviscth gold member
    May 16

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    I'm very happy to see that this has won a golden cup. It's a beautiful piece of a mothers love. Thanks so much for sharing.

  • K1r5ty
    January 3

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    Beautiful poem which brought me to tears! The imagery and emotion that is trapped between the lines is brillaint! It is a sad piece but also a nice tribute! Which is why i love writing poetry as the hidden voice can do amazin things!

    Thank you for entering.

  • Perfectly Imperfect
    November 17, 2007

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    Gosh I can relate so much to this piece... So heartfelt and emotional, it brought me to tears. Such beautiful sentiment and imagery, well done on such a sad piece, and good luck in the contest


  • xBluexEyedxGirlx
    November 15, 2007

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    Oh my gosh!!
    It's beautiful
    I wanted to cry
    But amazing!
    I...I don't know what else to say even
    It's just amazing
    Wonderful job!
    <3 Blue

  • Dreamer Girl silver member
    November 15, 2007

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    "No, little girl, you are my baby still"...

    And we shall play away the aching years...


    This is beautiful and definitely makes me wanna cry. Thanks for this...I lov those 2 lines.

    GL in the contest

  • MelissahhMidnite
    October 6, 2007
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    Such a sad write.
    Great work.

  • hoodoolover silver member
    October 5, 2007
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    Amazing writing, incredibly moving the language you softly and sadly speak here, magnificent!


  • KissMeImContagious
    September 23, 2007

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    Wow this is so sad...
    oh wow...
    this is so beautiful, but so sad.
    I really like this, its lovely.

    great job.

  • MelissahhMidnite
    September 22, 2007
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    Wow. I love the metaphors and the imagery. The story line is so sad. Love it all over.

  • MargaretG silver member
    August 28, 2007

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    Vera, on my first reading I couldn't see your lines for tears, I identified too much with this woman and her loss. Reading again, I am struck with the images and how you blend them for greater emotional impact. I wish I could write like this, but that is your voice - I may achieve such art in my own way someday. Congratulations on the gold, good to see on this fine poem.


  • fleur-de-lys
    August 12, 2007

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    I am speechless, so this comment is a bit redundant... I think this is one of the best works I've ever read on AP...


  • CarCrashHumor
    August 11, 2007
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    this is shattering.


    heart-breaking.

    I love it.

  • forever dreaming
    August 7, 2007
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    Stunning piece of poetry on a subject that is very close to my heart as I have lost 6 children and just this week I was told that my AP aunt is losing the child she has carried for 5 months. The language used in this poem hit me with an almighty thud whilst at the seem time leaving me feeling that my children are still with me. An excellent piece of work. Claire


  • Keith
    August 5, 2007

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    Heartfelt

    It's refreshing to read some real, heartfelt poetry. I don't know what other entries there are for this contest, but I feel instinctively that they will not reach this standard.


  • chills
    August 3, 2007

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    Oh Vera. These words took me apart. It is very rare for me to sit and weep into my keyboard. But I am now. If I could applaud thrice I would. 'I shall not come tonight, nor any night, .. etc' 'too young to name' - I can't choose any other lines without choosing them all. Thank you, x debs


  • Adios Muchachos gold member
    August 3, 2007
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    Non pareil

    • chills
      August 3, 2007
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      Bluff reef - yes -

      A perfectly fitting comment for this woman's poetry.

      • Adios Muchachos gold member
        August 3, 2007
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        Dear CW,
        I'm not usually so terse when reading Vera's things, but I was at a keyboard at work that is impossible to use, so I did manage to write that and planned to get back to her when I got home, which I am now. Thanks for looking at my poem as well.

        If you haven't already done so, check out Vera's "Bessie"! I see you are from the UK and I know you will have less trouble with it than I did. It is so d----d good(that's "darned")!

        Regards,
        John
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