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Cubana

Of scarlet sunsets
soaked in Mediterreanan passions
absolute sweetness
in her blossoming petals

romanticism's classic snapshot

But memories:
soon tattered and vanished
into amnesia's hiatus
emotionless realms of emptiness
or pierced sadness

Your french-kiss montages,
tanned caresses;
seductive caresses
or once fiery compassion
diffusing
    into bubbles of sometime love
in your sweetest melody.

Author notes

Inspired by Jay Chou's Secret, and a little mix of my own life. Weird title I know.

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  • sarajevo
    August 4, 2007
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    i love the last part...very smoothly finished...
    i miss the talks...tc,kisses