It has over taken me
Just consumed me whole
Temperture begins rising
I lost all my control
It can not be contained
This disease inside of me
In my comatose state
I cant help but feel free
Presence of mind
clarity for a brief moment
Too much hatred, anger
Fuels the fiery descent
Unleashing this beast
On anyone who comes close
Such raw blind fury
To all those who oppose
Relinquished of all love
Too many times was betrayed
So sit back and enjoy
As I revel in your dismay
A contest entry
- 3 Part Contest: Part 1- Rage [[BIG POINTS]] by GiftedPsychosis.
1500 points, ended August 7, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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"So I sit back and enjoy
As I revel in your dismay"
Love it! Wonderful poem, awesome ending.
Great job and good luck in the contest!
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