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Why Am I Sad That He Has Died? (pt.1)

Why am I mad,
Why have I cried?
Why am I sad,
That he has died?

He gave me the world
and promised me more.
If I stayed his girl,
And never walked out the door

So I stood at his side
Anxious and nervous to see,
What wonders I'd find
If we were meant to be
Come to find out
I fell deeply in love
I didnt ever doubt
ever since the first touch

Author notes

Rest In Peace Patrick

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  • Miss Malliciouse
    August 6, 2007
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    Wow that's a very nice poem ..its amazing how we all just can feel what the other has wrote...


  • The Guardian
    August 3, 2007
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    beautiful.. i cnat wait to read prt 2