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Rebirth

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My mordant stud of lust's temptations,
take me to where the heavens meet the earth;
the hidden realm of our wicked playground.

I give myself to the glory of you,
tossed in fantasies of my lost knight.
Love's caress upon your brawny shoulders;
embrace sultry arcs within your feathered touch.

Drink freely, the dew of my youthful fountain
and ride me to the setting sun, forgotten
where you will be born once again.

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  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    August 4, 2007
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    Enjoyed your poem--love the music and the images. Especially like the phoenix ending!


  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    August 3, 2007
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    Oh what a noce one! Very sensual and sultry!
    Thanks so much for your entry!
    Gaylene

  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    August 3, 2007

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    W O W!!! Dang girl! And I just had a shower! Whew this is so freaking hot! It is melting me over here! Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 3, 2007
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    This is hot and oh so worth the read. Thank you dear friend for something good to enjoy today.


  • penman gold member
    August 3, 2007

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    Wow!

    Oh my do you know how to have a good time or what? So well written, so powerfully sensual. Best of luck in the contest.

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