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shimmering soul

i see you're face
embrace you're touch
need you're kiss
i love you so much

look in your eyes
mystery held within
gaze into heaven
just to touch your skin

a shimmering beauty
a story untold
lies within you're eyes
i sit and watch,as the story unfolds

the stars and the sun
live within those eyes
i see all you are
all the reasons you cried

your soul reborn
in the eyes of love
a gift sent down to me
from the angels above

i see the ocean's
i see the sky
i know you're mine forever
i daren't ask why

i love you more than life itself
i want to be with you
i looked into you're eyes
and that's when i knew

i love you
forever and foralways
i know this love is true





Author notes

it's about my boyfriend...i havn't been with him for very long...but i love him more than anything...i look in his eyes and i just know i love him...

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  • poet2angels gold member
    August 7, 2007
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    Your emotions are felt in each line as is your longing for the one you love...

    Lovely
    Lynda


  • poetsruletheworld
    August 3, 2007
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    Beautiful write, so very soft and romantic, nicely penned