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Tapestries in the hallways





Memories of you

hang beautifully
like the finest Persian

tapestries in the hallways

of my mind
you have woven them

so skillfully
I could never bear

to let them part
I gaze upon them lovingly

thinking only of  two

 

 

 

 

 



 

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  • DancingRed
    August 4, 2007

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    This is a beautifully concise piece; each word has tonnes of meaning.
    One thing -- I think you meant 'bear' not 'bare'.
    Thanks for entering.

    DancingRed.