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Shimmer

Shimmer,
Glitter.

Your eyes do such
As I walk int the room.

When I look at you
And our eyes meet....

My feeling shimmer into more exciting ways.
and my breathe starts to catch in my throat.

You sweep me off of my feet
Just by the shimmer of your eyes.

A contest entry

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  • poet2angels gold member
    August 7, 2007

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    Wonderful imagery of beautiful eyes approaching...
    TY so much for entering!

    Lynda