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A Lilac's Aura

Hundreds of tiny buds
On an emerald branch;
The colour of monarchs,
The colour of purity.
Sweet aroma of potpourri
Fills early spring's atmosphere,
Around nature's gift of friendship.

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Written September 6th, 2003

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  • Ava Noire silver member
    September 9, 2003
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    This is really pretty. This reminds me of a day last Spring when I was sitting outside, completely alone in my own world. There were tiny lilac petals floating in the breeze and it was really pretty. I wrote a rictameter about it Lilac Spring ...I think it is still on here somewhere. ::shrugs:: this is really pretty.


  • RoseBlossom
    September 6, 2003
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    Nothing beats the Heavenly smell of Lilacs... mmm, lilacs...