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All For One

We are the ones who were left behind to build the others up
The shoulders to stand on, the fingers to step on
The cubicle dwelling nine-to-fivers
Paying with their overtime hours and endless projects
For a two-week corporate manager vacation
We are the children whose school graduation
Is an experiment in efficiency and standardized test scores
Whose recess is canceled for studying, to keep up with the world
The extra Hobbits in the Fellowship of the Rings
The other 299 not named in 300
The stage the Oscar winners get to walk across
The forgotten, the looked over, the statistics
A foundation for the glamorous few
But at least we have a common oppression to hold us together
Something to link us with each other, somewhere to belong

Even if it isn't remembered by anyone else

Author notes

Just what came out, inspiration or whatever.

A contest entry

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  • squirrelgirl
    April 2, 2008

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    Sorry you didn't place or anything. This really is an interesting poem. I think it's pretty cool.
    Great write.
    May your pencil stay sharp!
    ~squirrel~


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    September 1, 2007

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    Thanks for your entry. I like the statements you make here. Most definately things that the world should take into consideration when mapping out the future of its youth. Or perhaps we should allow the youth to do some of their own mapping. Those 9-5 cubicles are not all they are cracked up to be

    Best of luck in the contest.


  • MuddyKing
    August 24, 2007
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  • kirbysman Moderators member
    August 22, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry into the Allpoetry Legacy contest. Something for all of us to think about whether we agree or disagree with this. Best of luck in the contest.

    Paul


  • cvillelisa
    August 21, 2007

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    Thanks for your entry -- I think many times, many of us can relate to much of what you say here...

    Good luck in the contest.

    Lisa


  • Kari gold member
    August 3, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry. One thing I can say about this is that everyone can relate to it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    August 3, 2007

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    To me, this read more like a list and less like poetry. I would have prefered to see more imagery, more of a moment or two that were captured.

    Just my opinion, thanks for the entry.

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