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Finding You Alone

Missing image

She won't look at you, lost in the shadows
Soft hands drawing her skirt up in a semblance of a curtsy
Mirroring the submission you show before her
Nearly shattering the fragile glass of your soul

With barely a movement of her darkness

Her eyes swirl the icy grey of winter

The sun forever lost behind the clouds

Is this darkness a window to her soul?

A door to the heart that has forgotten how to beat?

No rainbow will follow the storm she sets upon you

Rain that pours and pounds to bruise the rose petals at your feet

Although no amount of water could stick those white robes to you

This fallen angel will try to catch your skirts in the wind

Just to make you feel a little more isolated

In the dark evil world she creates around you

Put out the light in your halo, the fire of your soul

There's no need for it here, depressed into black

Author notes

Option one, the pretty picture, and used all of the words for option two.

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  • squirrelgirl
    March 31, 2008

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    Yay! And honorable winner trophy to add to your ever-growing sea of green!
    "Is this darkness a window to her soul?
    A door to the heart that has forgotten how to beat?"
    Great write!
    May your pencil stay sharp!
    ~squirrel~


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    August 12, 2007

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    this was a wonderufl take and you used two options
    wow your amazing then
    lol
    this was wonderful and made the picture come alive
    i love that picture its one of my favs
    a wonderful write
    well done