I could never stand the sound of the phrase “making love.”
even now, it makes me feel as if I’m going to vomit
little ♥ symbols all over the pages
of a trashy.[fuck.me].romance.novel;
now trust me, darling--
I’m no half-hour whore,
or a feminazi with a grudge against
the penis owning race,
or even a vindictive little bitch
who’s had her heart shattered too many times to count;
I’m none of those things.
I’m a girl who likes sex;
a woman who is in tune with her own
gloriously beautiful
& magnificently desirable
body;
a female who know what she wants,
gets what she goes after,
and makes no apologies
for casual sex,
or by the hour romances,
or .dirty.rough.kinky. fucking,
or for ANYTHING that you
may [not]
approve of;
[because what it all boils down to, is this:
I’m getting laid, and you’re whining about my morals]
& I think my orgasm trumps your bitching;;
Author notes
Option 17.5: A sex lifestyle
& darling, we're drowning in the finest wine
thissss was written for a friend of mine; but shh: don't tell her.
A contest entry
- [This scar is a fleck on my porcelain skin] UPDATE. by LucyLightning.
550 points, ended August 3, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Women's Options (Guys are Welcomed Too) by Dlvvanzor.
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Please tell me what you think
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I actually don't see what would make this about an INDEPENDENT WOMAN, but it was still well described. The poem seems more like a poem about liking to have sex. It could be about a woman who is INDEPENDENT, but it mainly seems to be pointing in the direction of something different. I'm not sure, though. Nice job, anyway.
Good luck in my contest! -
Steamy
Raw and powerful, straightforward. For some reason we aren't supposed to be honest, we're supposed to be swept off our feet and conquered. BLECH!!! Hate those effing romance novels! Great stuff, best wishes in the comp! -
orgasms definately win over bitching in my book as well. nice poem, i love the use of feminazi. :]
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Ha ha ha! Girl power! I love the [brackets] and the .periods. where you put them. Adds a great feel to it. ^_^ Orgasms trumping complaints.
Good luck in the contest!
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wow. haha i like it that was right to the point like BAM in your face im going to do what i want great job!
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hehe.
I like it
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haha. lol. this was .. EFFING AMAZING!
wow.
totally totally so so so very totally
what I was looking for.
Thank you. ha.
=]]
now trust me, darling--
I’m no half-hour whore,
or a feminazi with a grudge against
the penis owning race,
or even a vindictive little bitch
who’s had her heart shattered too many times to count;
^^I loved this.
It reminded me of something Alanis Morissette would sing. -
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ohhh Alanis Morissette, she amazes me sometimes.
so jaded, and yet so loveable.
nice connection to this piece. haha. ♥
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