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Natures Wealth

Is not what is
In natures bosom
A wealth that yield
Perennial dividends
Shall we destroy nature’s wealth
To build our own
Which lost ephemeral.

Is not flowing river
An invaluable wealth
Until interfered
Made murky
Turning song of joy into sorrow.

Cuckoos song
Lost its flavor
Breathing air tainted
Is not this loss irreparable?
The wealth created
Never compensates the lost jewels.

Hills lost,
So does the glacier
Sea encroached into the land
Natures green is lost
Humans brown faded
No one is winner in the end
When one plunders natures wealth.

Author notes

Nothing is gained by destroying nature

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  • Francis Vincent
    October 12, 2007

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    very good

    i like the beginning
    asking a question
    i'm a nature kinda guy
    and
    it's a shame
    such beauty
    of course, we must harvest the fruits of nature to survive
    agriculture, unfortunately-trees, fish from the sea
    but
    i get the sense that a lot of it is greed
    do we really need to reap from nature
    and
    not replenish

  • L000
    October 12, 2007

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    tons of things come to mind - which is an excellent component to poetry i feel . and I agree whole heartdly with the last couple of lines .

    keep penning
    glass fingers


  • Touchof1der silver member
    September 25, 2007

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    The pure unadulterated beauty of this piece lies in its truth and philosophy of life which has been taken over control by your muse. The description and concept of the words flowing across the page have been gently pushed to the forefront to reveal an all too peculiar phenomena, which is known as life. Indeed this a great write.
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • Manoj Sanyal
    August 7, 2007
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    you are very right dear...well expressed.
    good luck