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Puppet Master

I played puppet
You played master
Tug my strings and
I’d dance faster
Day in, day out
Stole me, plunder
Ravage, savage
Drug me under
My lips mimicked
“God’s” own ruling
“Yes sir, no sir”
Brainwashed schooling
Weekends slaughtered
Weak beginnings
Weakened martyrs
Strengthen endings

You play puppet
I’ll play master
Tug your strings and
You’ll pound faster

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  • Poetdontknowit
    August 3, 2007
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    NICE

    I adore the puppet concept, very clever my fellow poet. I like!!!!!!!!!!!!
    POETDONTKNOWIT