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Gemstones

Shining like half of the sun
Brightness and beauty coming from one crystal

So many shiny gemstones in this small world

Very few people go searching for dimonds 

Most peaple don't think about admiring the beauty of rubys

If they were to appreciate such beutiful gemstones

they would start searching for them in a store

Very few peaple will take time to care about the beauty of a precious gemstone

 

 

 

Author notes

What my poem is saying is that, very few people take time to admire the beauty of the earth and i used gemstones as my example.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    August 18, 2007

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    I think your poem speaks very clearly for itself You did a great job delivering your message here I really like this.