Sweet little imperfections
Make our world go round
Showing us life isn't perfect
Bringing out the beauty
Of trying again
Making our success
That much sweeter
Burning down perfection
Keeping away all its bland style
Beautiful imperfections
Author notes
Option 1D
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
700 points, ended August 3, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I need Ap family because I cant stand mine anymore by Starz of Heaven.
475 points, ended August 15, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF Contest Now allowing PreWrites IF they go with the options by Amorous Arms.
600 points, ended September 16, 2007, 21 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i love it. its so sweet and caring with the feelings added to it=] very sweet! thanks so much for entering and best of luck!!
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imperfections are what make life interesting, excellent write, short yet well versed, and creating such deep poem, with a message for all to see cool poem
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Awwww thank you for your note in your Author box
I am shy but im blushing It would be a honor to have you as a Aunt I love this poem also 
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no body's perfect
ur right.even our imperfections make us perfect.thats wut makes human beings so beautiful.love it. -
pretty
this is a pretty poem,very relatable tome as well,nice flow....good ending,really ties the poem togeather!!"making our success that much sweeter" that is my fave-line
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This is very good. Iloved it thanks for sharing and best of luck to you
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thank you, glad you liked it
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Ah, very good! Lines 4-7 fantastic as that is what I believe. To truly be able to appreciate the personal successes in our lives we first need to know a life without them....we need to gain them and it is by embracing...understanding and then, eventually shedding our imperfections that we do just that. Really enjoyed the direction you took. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you.
Bella
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Wonderfully written!!! Good luck in the contest
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Thank you
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I really like this poem. THere are so many people out there that think that you have to be perfect. I hate that. Perfection doesnt exist. And this poem just screams 'EMBRACE YOUR IMPERFECTIONS!' I love it! That last line ... again ... pulled it together. You have a little knack for that. You know it? Lol. Great job on this poem, dear.
Megan -
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Megan, I really appreciate all your comment and how honest and supportive you are about my poetry (and life in general). I love seeing comment from you, they encourage me to do better and keep writing! I love you!!
Kelcey
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