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My Strong Man

I really wanted a strong man
The Sheryl Crow song type
A man whose naot afraid to talk
or just let me speak my mind
A man whose strong enough
to hold me when i cry
A man who gives strong love
that will last untill we die
A man that's strong enough
to set aside his pride
A man that can tell the truth
about his fears his tears or even say "I lied"
The man that's mine is truely strong
come on...he's putting up with me
But if u ask him " Are you strong enough?"
He'll say "yes, I have to be"

Author notes

Strong love, a strong heart, and strong emotions. That's what makes a strong man. and mine has all of the above and more. *Any Dream will do*

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  • Jp-WOW-
    August 14, 2007

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    v. sweet, of course i dnt lke to brag but im lke dat...lols no a truelly dreamy man and it is a shame that not more of those men are around. no faults with the rhymes or structure, a nice poem and well done