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[ A fallen spark ]

A fallen spark
Thought to have died
Burns the flesh once more
But we are still untied

We all are to blame
And know it's all I
The fault is our own
When we failed to fly

A lost expectation
Never to be seen
For what we all thought
It had to be unclean

And my skin is on fire
When I burn once more
For the one golden day
Before she was whore

Author notes

My first was lost and now is found. To all who know (Angie) it's for Binja.

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  • scottles
    August 6, 2007
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    it's a really good poem, slightly depressing, but i like it alot


  • Skawe
    August 3, 2007
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    Aw Kira, read your messages.