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A Family Gift

Happy Birthday young Timothy
Quite a man you'll soon become
Life is a serious journey
But don't forget about some fun

Be light in heart and spirit
Enjoy the gifts of love and family
But for the greatest gift in life
Look to your dad, and see the man you will soon be.

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Happy Birthday Timothy, you share it with my nephew.
StormGoddess

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  • poeticpieces
    August 3, 2007

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    thanks so much for the poem this was nice, and trust me, I can't forget about some fun, or what would I do with myself lol... thanks again and great job on this poem!

    poeticpieces


  • Asdzaa Nadleehe silver member
    August 2, 2007
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    wonderful..these are all so beautiful
    best wishes
    Peace
    ~A~


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 2, 2007

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    He truly is his father's son and with his spirit and compassion and energy for life. He truly is a gift. xoxo


  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 2, 2007

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    -sighs-

    What a precious write from the heart, thanks so much for gracing him with your words of tenderness. I appreciate ya, and much love to you and yours!

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver~ xo


  • countrybabe gold member
    August 2, 2007

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    Beautifully Written

    This is very beautifully written my friend. Well done and good luck in this contest.

    Keep writing

    Countrybabe


  • HeavenScent4U
    August 2, 2007

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    beautifully written. good sound advise, especially the last line. i agree 100% best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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