Dear D.B.
I just wanted you to know
That I've overcome the pain
The sometimes unbearable pain
Of losing my innocence to a numbskull like you
It doesn't bother me anymore,
Well of course it does- but not like before
My friends tell me I should have turned you in
At least tell my parents what you did
But I couldn't, I felt like I was the one in the wrong
But never again will I feel that way
I was drunk-
You took advantage of me
That shall be something that you can think of
Because I'm done thinking of you.
Author notes
I wrote, I think, 3 poems about this drunken night that was full of regrets- '...and all this pain i feel' 'i just want to forget' and 'slipping into this darkness' now those may not be the actual titles- but they're pretty damn close...
A contest entry
- Letters Never Written by FallingTwilight.
300 points, ended August 15, 2007, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ♥ Letters ♥ by Atrophya.
600 points, ended August 28, 2007, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very emotional piece. you should've turned him in no matter how much you loved him. if he took advantage of you once, he'll do it again. maybe not to you but he will do it again. glad that you're at least alright.
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I'm glad you got it out hun, You should tell on the guy if he took advantage of you and it hurts you. I mean, theres nothing wrong with that. You're not wrong for it babe, he is. He's an asshole. I love this write.
GL in the contest.
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Full of emotion and very heartfelt.Thank you for sharing this,
FallenPoeticAngel
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The emotion was screaming at me! Good job.
Savvy
oxox
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love it, emotional and hearbreaking.. its hard for any one to overcome anything like this, and i think you have done a good job of writing a letter that was never written, although i believe it should be written and sent.. but then again, saying is easier than doing is it not? so on that note, please do not listen to me.. any ways great write, its beautiful as is all of the ones worth taking the time to read..
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