Floating along on aqua blue water,
hand trailing along making ripples.
Sunlight reflecting like sparkling diamonds,
across the refreshing surface of the lake.
Further away from troubles and woes,
leaving all adversity far behind.
Gentle little breezes play with your hair,
as your mind drifts along with your raft.
Peace and tranquility settles in your soul,
making your heart utter a soft sigh.
No demands for your time or attention,
just you alone in your own little world.
Author notes
JeannieD
A contest entry
- Merry-Go-Round, Invite ONLY by Lady-Pegasus.
1200 points, ended September 9, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Magnificent!!
Wonderful weaving of words busy bee
Love the images You have brought forth and the
Peace plus Tranquility
Magnificent verse!!
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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excellent!
You have created some wonderful images in this poem. I do think we need to be in our own little world from time to time. Peace, quiet, nature and solitude can work miracles.
Lovely border too.......very tranquil.
Good luck in the contest!
Ethereal One
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Sometimes our own little world can be a great place to visit
thank you for sharing,
Love and Light
Frozentearz
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