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Don't...

I'll etch your name
into my skin
that way you'll never
leave again
I'll always remember
those sleepless nights
we stayed awake
until the sun was in sight.
Smiling and laughing
like couples do
Then one day
something happened to you
she walked into your life
while I was still there
she stole your heart
and you didn't even care
I fell for
"She's just a friend"
Then one day
"It's over, Its gotta end."
I felt frail, and dead
and powerless and weak
We saw eachother the next day
you didnt dare speak
I went home that night
and showed my true rage
I made myself a bloody book
Every cut a memory page
A page of you
a page of us
a page of her
and no more trust.
And I'll etch my name
into your skin
that way you'll never
forget again

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  • tearstainedangel
    August 4, 2007

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    Awwee... i know exactly how you feel, although i hope that you don't feel this way and that you don't have to go though this, i hope that this is only wirting.