tiny spectrums of light
invisible to the eye
the center of my being
my soul
that will never die
created by my master
a masterpiece of art
he molded me from dust
my body
he perfected every part
yet in his image
he created my soul
the light that shines
within me
and fills a void hole
and when my heart
no longer beats
and my body returns
to dust
my soul will return
to my master
if in him...
I place my trust
Author notes
You don't have a soul. You are a soul. You have a body...Quote by C.S. Lewis
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A contest entry
- you are a ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended August 16, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hi Sassy - This is a beautiful poem - the rhyme and flow great - the content right on - there may be a few places I might tweak it - but all in all - it is beautiful - The C.S. Lewis quote is close - what we are is a spirit being clothed in a flesh and blood body that some day will fall to the ground but our spirit being will keep on trucking - ohhhhhhh we may look back and take a last look - Bless God - Joe
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my soul will return
to my master
if in him...
I place my trust
This is just through to the concept and the lines also the words ..all are touching the essence ..well done..thanks for such a deep entry...
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I really needed to read this. The mysteries never cease. Thank you for the guiding light. A great poem.
May your joy be full.
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What a really great quote and your poem is pretty damn good too! Good luck in the contest and take care! x
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WOW this was great.
this
Great wording and flow.
All the best in the contest
delila
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