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Quiet reflections

Quiet reflection makes me think of you
So far away...so far...

Shall I cry a river of tears upon which I can sail to you?

Or perhaps call upon the One to part the sea
that I might walk upon dry land to be at your side?

No, this is foolishness, mere fantasy, unreal...

My desire for you is real-I will not settle
for fantasy to bring it to it's object..

I will build bridges, I will fill my time with
practicalities, all designed to bring you to me
or I to you...

Only when we are together shall I allow my fantasy to become my reality...

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  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    October 24, 2007

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    Strong sentiments ,a powerful love

    can you?

    A love strong enough to build bridges to unite

    with the loved one

    fantastic imagery,river of tears

    A brilliant poem

    Thank you

    Nick

    • Anybodys-guess
      October 27, 2007
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      I like this one myself, thanks for reading and for your sweet comment Nick. Later, AG

  • Nobody126
    September 1, 2007

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    think and you will see

    think and you will see, a paradise of fantasy.very nice poem .when one fly, he or she or they, do nothing but cry..this is so wonderful that you cant fly but write the lovely fantasies to live , to love , to reach the sky.