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When I close my eyes

When I close my eyes
there is darkness but,
I still see you there.

A light emblazoned on my mind.
I hear your voice-your laugh-your trilling 'R's,
and feel my heart
burst into Flame.

When will I be with you, when?

I relive every word, every breath, every sigh
and my eyes shed their
liquid love to soothe the burning desire
these thoughts of you bring.

Snapshot moments of life...
I am dead until I live with you
a mere automaton until inspired by
the breath of your voice in my ear.

'Cinderella and her Prince', 'Rodger and Sonya',
only shadows of ourselves...
Until Sting and Flame
meet and join to 
tear away this darkness
when I close my eyes....

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Dreams can come true...I hope...

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  • Nobody126
    September 1, 2007

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    eyes

    eyes can see, heart can love..mind can think and analyse...love can tear away this darkness, when I close my eyes. sooooo beautiful