The bumps and creaks you hear in the night,
Your parents tell you it's the wind,
But I know it's not.
It's the creatures below that hide from the light,
they steal your souls,
and never give them back.
You can beg and plead,
but they'll just watch you bleed,
And you scream for mercy,
They laugh at your discomfort.
You call them thieves,
they nod and agree,
They have no time to speak,
they have more souls to steal.
They sun chases away the moon,
The light chases away those creatures.
You are safe at last!- for now anyways.
Until the moon over powers the sky,
and All the lights goes out and dies.
You'll nestel under your covers so safe and proud,
But don't be alarmed if they take you from down under.
How should i know these "Thieves" you may ask?
I am one of them,
And i'm coming,
To steal your precious life.
Author notes
I've neer done a poem like this before! it was quite exciting. hah
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haha u cud join the darkside we did have cookies before i ate them
brilliant write tho kinda makes me thonk of the boogie man lol
keep it up
Marty -
Well, Good job on your first dark write. It was interesting but could use a little work. Some practice will get you into the wonderful world of Darkness.. Join the darkside, we have cookies! Lol, I'm randomn today. Great job, and good luck in the contest!
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