The past means naught but what has been
and futures lure me from my work-
so I'll just focus on my ken.
And let all else be left in murk.
Author notes
This came with a celtic accent. Don't really know why, haven't ever written with a celtic accent before... weird.
A contest entry
- Quicky with a catch 12 entries only... by Tirrell.
327 points, ended August 3, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Um, yeah, go for it...
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You know, this is almost like reading one of old billy's sonnets...
(Shakespear) I just wanted to do a happy thing, yet I have only points to do one, wanted to do three..
There..
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hehehe...
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this is nice, yet it does not follow all the way through. For me it is a poem looking into the past, insteand of embracing the quote which is all about the present. Nice efforts. also should be 5 lines with the set line counts of 7/7/9/10/10 (syllables per line), also there seems a natural pause after naught where a coma should be... Robert
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oops. forgot about the syllable count. I read the qoute and jumped from there. impulsive, I am! no worries, it was a great contest.
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