close your eyes and listen to the voices of the lake
feel the water wash over us as the song follows
let the crystal clear elixer give us faith
like no religeon could ever give us
quietly, you drown in your happieness
that leaves you floating in the cold air
but soon gravity comes back to us
and so strong, it is difficult to bear
i sing along with the sounds as they continue
now you close your eyes to drift off to sleep
and after a while i begin to drift off with you
i'd give anything to be your twilight dream
Author notes
i'd give anything to be your twilight dream!!
much luv~
kitty
Would you be my twilight dream? lol!
Comments
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Simple and beautiful! You have some very strong talent here! Keep it up! I need to read more of your work though, not enough time to enjoy the wonderful pieces that you write!
Kyle
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wow lovely work kinda a new look on a stale genra of poetry very nice and thanks for the add you rock 2 the poet of random complaments! lol
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very nice kitty!!!! I like is alot, and it felt so serene and peaceful for some reason!!!! It made me want to cry....
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