My fancy is to see your face
When each day arrives
And play pretend with your embrace
Whatever you contrive
When play pretend becomes my stay
I change my point of view
To catch the rays of sunny days
I go online with you
When I find you online I smile
You so inspire my muse
Because you have that special style
That spins my fancy loose
Though we bide in virtual worlds
Our quest is none but fact
For me the boy and you the girl
A stage on which to act
To act our parts we spin and whirl
To show that friendships grow
With you the boy and me the girl
Our faces all aglow
So hand in hand we walk as friends
Act One is now complete
The curtain fell but rose again
A new world, shall we meet?
Author notes
He said; "This is fun!"
She said; "It sure is!"
When ever you're ready Leo... WE must do this again!
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I just love this one oh so smooth it is like one person wrote it
beautiful indeed
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i loved this sensational collaboration. the rhythm and pace and language was just a sheer delight
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I, personally, flinched at that last line. It just didn't seem strong enough to end an otherwise cute and brilliant poem.
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I like this one :)
You are such a good poet!!
Cith
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Wow
I love your "scene". The whole world is a stage and we are only actors. Great job!
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Cute as a stage review
very cleaver. I liked thos very much. mac
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it promises
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What It do?
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I Love This
The whole world's a stage but online fun has to be one of the best ways to brighten ones day. You two did a great job with this. Made me want to be apart of the fun. Hugs~ Cuddles
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I agree 110%. This challegne was and is a labor of love. Thanks Renee for the invite. Can Act Two be far away? I think not my friend.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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