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Atma

It is so I'm caged in flesh
Bound by organs
Bound to this Earth.
My actions chain me
Into this state
For many years
And for many moons.

I wish to leviate
From this confining cell
To reach the rays emitted
From the transcendental being.
To escape this world
This place of materialism.

A contest entry

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 12, 2007

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    From the transcendental being.
    To escape this world
    This place of materialism.

    So spirtual description of the unsaid here through the depth of your poetry ..well done..and thanks for such a wonderful entry in my contest...