a flow of silk winds ever inward
transience, translucence
slowly spreading velvet wings
to drink the sunlight
glistening, sparkling, glinting the fiery sky
with each mirrored drop of morning dew
that coats its glossy skin
caressing itself each evening
as the light grows thin and dim
the twilight of another day
Author notes
no particular flower in my mind...well, maybe a tulip.
Written September 5th, 2003
A contest entry
- Blossoms by Ms. Trick.
300 points, ended September 7, 2003, 22 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is nice. It's very peaceful. I enjoyed it, in spite of the fact that you didn't want to commit to any one flower. With so many beautiful blosoms it's hard to do that anyway. Thank you for your comment on my poem.
Patti -
this is john again...sorry she is defensive of me...she loves me too much...it's kind of disturbing....sorry for the comment...but it is what she thought so i am leaving it up(if she had her own account you wouldn't have had this apology so...nyeh i dunno hehe) i thought the poem was nice...the carressing itself line was incredible...again...sorry have a nice day
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