Simple, yet hidden;
from those it might fall to prey,
fluttering softly.
Author notes
Haiku
A contest entry
- *~ Poetry Formed XIII ~* ~* ~* ~* by Arkbear.
300 points, ended August 2, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dust Off Those Old Haiku (Traditional 5-7-5) by Pollycheck.
425 points, ended December 15, 2007, 57 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Simple and descriptive.
Good luck with it.
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Simple, yet hidden;
from those it might fall to prey,
fluttering softly.
Thank you for entering my ku contest. I must apologize, but I can not determine what this write is even about. But than again, I have hae been known to miss seeing the forest because the trees were in my way -
well written congrats
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Oo, the butterfly effect. That's just what it reminded me of. Nicely done. A good haiku, great word choice, keep up the good work, poet!
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Very nice ~
This is a Lovely Ku', yet I wish you had dug deeper
to find the edges of this picture and penned more
than what was right there in front of you ~
Good job, and I hope to see you in the next
contest of Poetry Formed ~
Bear ~
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