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Truth

I am alone again
and its no ones fault
but my own.
The isolation is my choice
the tears my reward
I said goodbye
knowing it was the right thing,
but now i'm not so sure.
The pain in your eyes
makes me wonder.
Maybe you did love me.
Maybe I was just a fool
who couldnt see the truth

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for those who asked why i wasnt writing,here you go

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  • karabi
    August 2, 2007

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    VERY GOOD

    It's a little gem. Without tricks and gimmicks it's message is direct - direct from the heart - that is what good poems always do. It's really very very moving.