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let it all out

it should be from within your soul,
come from the depths of your heart.
dripping with emotion
from finish to start
make me cry the tears you did.
smile the same smile.
make us understand,
put your heart on trial.

dark and mysterious
with a twist at the end,
revealing all you are
but makes sure it blends.
let us see inside your soul
pure and raw and real.
tell us about a love
how you cry, how you live, how you heal

a poem is about you,
designed as a release.
to get out all the things
and to put yourself at peace.
tell someone you love them
tell them that you care
tell us of the pain
just make sure you share.

that is what a poem is
in my eyes it's who i am
so write about your feelings
show us that you can

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option 2...the poetry one...

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  • bananasfoster42
    August 2, 2007
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    i really like this. thanks for entering