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Gaurdian Angel

The path I walk
I don't walk alone
For I have a gaurdian angel
His name is shugoryuu

He wears all black
and hides alot
only after dark will he come out and play

On a forked path
where we choose to meet
one way leads to a cemetary
the other leads to the village near by

Which one I choose at this very moment
I can not run I can not hide
either way he'll be by my side

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  • Swan song gold member
    August 6, 2007

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    Not too bad you are a chance taker and that is very good. Again I canhear the rhymns and can see some very good talent here.


  • bananasfoster42
    August 2, 2007
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    awesome poem. i think u got a typo there in the last sentence. thanks for entering


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 2, 2007
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    Great poem my dear hope to see you here more often and read more of your poems.