I see you looking at me with a glare so wanting.
I undress for you like a pathetic Juliet.
To have you here with me is all I desire
with your dashing good looks and greased back hair,
I want you as my trophy lover.
So I stand here teasing you
while you are on the TV,
because this is just a dream.
I'm just standing on clouds,
because you are there on the silver screen
and I'm in my bathrobe wishing you were mine
like so many other viewers' dream.
Author notes
Taxing Minds
A contest entry
- Diamond Dogs by alexandrathegreat.
475 points, ended August 16, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This was really good- quite powerful sir!
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Oh psh, why is it powerful? It is just making fun of people's obsessions with celebrities haha.
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Wow, I love this line
"I undress for you like a pathetic Juliet."
So raw and hardcore! Great interpretation of the topic! Thank you for entering my contest
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ohhhhhhhh my god, i want you as my trophy lover, what a confidence. your poems are short but very explosive. nicely done....
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