you enter the room
as im getting changed
i grab the sheet
to hide my shame
my cheeks are aglow
and fever is rising
see you standing there
licking your lips
tantalising
my bodies a quiver
as you walk closer
feel you ruggid hands
slip the sheet across my shoulders
the stubble on your chin
tickles as you caress my neck
I shiver and shake
but not with fear
this wonderful feeling
is ectasy.....
this act is not dirty
but full of passion
you are my man
make me feel like a woman
as we move on
i draw the curtain
keep this to us
without the world
because when im with you
i feel like a girl
A contest entry
- Diamond Dogs by alexandrathegreat.
475 points, ended August 16, 2007, 7 entries
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Comments
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This was awesome!! I loved the ending where you said, "I draw the curtain/Keep this to us/ without the world/ Because when I'm with you/ I feel like a girl" That was awesome!! Great luck in the contest, I am sure you will do well. Nice job!!
~Pandy~
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Oh scandelous! I simply loved this, it makes me want to call my man up and demand him to come home from work earlier so we can get freaky! Wonderful poem! thank you for entering my contest!
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nice..just nice, but i'm smilling
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