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Little Moments With You

There's little moments where you and I are together,
But I know this was meant 4 years later forever.
Though it rained on our special day,
I will be fond of you in every single way.

I've often thought Just how we got here,
But I know there's something about us dear.
Little moments when you close your eyes,
And I wished upon the enchanting skies.

I remember the day you took me as your wife,
Boy has that changed me and my entire life.
Glad it was a time my father was very well,
But time passes on and so did his life I tell.

There's little moments where you and I are together,
I dreamt it as a little girl as in forever true,
I will never forget the day that we both said "I Do".

Little Moments With You

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10b. "Little Moments" - by Brad Paisley

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  • Ryno
    August 2, 2007
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    Beautiful piece... great, vivid flow.


    • stormigrl
      August 11, 2007
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      Forever Ryan

      Thanks so much for your comments. I'm going to read some of yours if I may.

      Marianne


  • bananasfoster42
    August 2, 2007
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    this is really sweet and beautiful. thanks for entering


    • stormigrl
      August 11, 2007
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      bananasfoster42

      Thanks for allowing me to participate in your contest.
      Marianne