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[ Love without a freely given response ]

Love without a freely given response
Is not love
I used to have it within my grasp
But now it is gone for good
Over something I have no control over
I have lost everything in return for loving her
I still have her by my side
But not because she loves me
But because she needs me
It hurts so deep to have the person you care
With you but not caring about you
She has my future in her hands
She is going to destroy it
Love hurts never took this meaning before
If she doesn’t marry me I lose it all
I will have to start from square one
My life once again has gotten to the point of no return
And unfortunately I lost it again
But there is nothing like losing it all
Through the one you love
Who no longer loves you
And is going to wreck your life because of it
All I want is to be here for my daughter
If she doesn’t love me fine I can find another woman
Maybe even a better woman but I can’t find another daughter

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