dear Little one
this is me you mum
i feel you move inside of me
and I'm over whelmed with glee
excitement is painted on my face
each time i hear you heart race
when we go for your check up
once i even felt you hiccup
your dads so happy to
he is so keen on learning what to do
you are going to be our first
and its scary but but we are so joyful we could burst
we have name books galore
but when ever we decided on one we find one more
i have to admit you came as a surprise
and IL never forget the look in your dads eyes
when i told him we would soon be hearing little feet
he was so scared but so sweet
but now we know we can make it
even if we have to take thing bit by bit
we will be learning with you
if only you could tell us what we are going to have to do
but we will work it out after all we are a team
when ever you hear your dads voice you start to kick this makes him beam
your a daddies girl or boy already
he get so carried away i have to keep him steady
he wants to decorate your room
but i keep telling him he cant assume
that your a girl but he says he know
but i know he will love you no matter which way it goes
i love you my angel all snuggled inside
love you for ever
your mom
Author notes
this is for a contest! i just don't want anyone thinking I'm pregnant! I'm a bit young for that! this is totally fiction!
A contest entry
- letter to a baby by CarCrashHumor.
600 points, ended August 11, 2007, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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lovely
going through this just now xx great write -
This made me believe that u were pregnant for a moment!! You expressed it so well, as if it were happening to you, which was the point really so that means u got it across!!
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I got shivers down my back wen i read that, its beautiful! I loved it.
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"and IL never forget the look in your dads eyes
when i told him we would soon be hearing little feet
he was so scared but so sweet
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you captured the excitement and fear of being first-time parents.. complete with love. there are some spelling mistakes/typos, but overall this was good. thanks for entering -
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thanks for the comment! it seems no matter how hard i try even using spell check and i make mistakes!
ana
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this is a good poem I'm in the same contest good luck
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