Each beat of the heart
and thought of a day
are more than
the body's or mind's
vow's of life.
They are
gentle nudges
to live
beyond one's senses,
inhaling
all the fragrances
of profound
exhaled in the currents
from the Lord's breath.
We never truly thrive
till we kiss the dawn
with our mind's eye,
sensing the soul's fabric
dressing our essence
in eternity's pulse.
Author notes
Prompt-
You don't have a soul. You are a soul. You have a body....C. S. Lewis
A contest entry
- you are a ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended August 16, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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sensing the soul's fabric
dressing our essence
in eternity's pulse.
a great depth you have shown in the sentiments of yours..I am touched with the beauty of the nature you have shown here.. welldone..thanks for such a deep entry in my contest...
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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Sigh... Wonderful piece of poetry. love this take on the pic. Good luck in the contest my friend.
delila
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Thank you so much for the touching comment
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Very well done, this is a very good write for the prompt. Nice flow and so soft. Best of luck to you in the contest...Scott
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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this is a wonderfully well written write. great job. I think you did such a wonderful job on the prompt. great take on the prompt. such a wonderful read.
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Thank you for such a wonderful comment.
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This is deep!!!!! Wow! and yet I can fully relate to every word of it!! Amazing how you can do that so easily! Best of luck in this contest!
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Thank you so much for the wonderful commment.
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