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Sunset Brilliance

sunset shines in brilliance
outside my bedroom window
reminding me of inner resilience
leaving me with the question how

such beauty does reside here
in colors that are luscious
as if it just for me appears
it’s obvious it’s not atheous

pebbles rounded by the shore
smooth as a polished jewels
adding to the lush décor
where nothing breaks the rules

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  • SeaWithYourHeart
    August 14, 2007

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    pebbles rounded by the shore
    sooth as a polished jewels
    adding to the lush décor
    where nothing breaks the rules


    this is a fantastioc poem. this last vers blew me away the imagery is fantastic. love it
    well done and good luc