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O, Sky!

Oh, heavy clouds,
Stop raiging storm,
Calm down, be patient,
O, sky!
You roar, destroy,
Again perform,
The dance of death,
O, sky!

No one to control
Your greatest might,
No one to compete
Against Your power,
O, sky,
Hear me,
Stop this hurricane fight,
Obey the call,
Soften Your glower.




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  • Candy6
    June 21, 2008
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    Good write


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 11, 2007
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    words of wisdom
    words of joy
    words of sorrow
    and then words to teach with

    Riftkin

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    August 21, 2007

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    This is a great piece, I love the sentiment in it, however the few spelling mistakes did kinda put me off a little when reading, well done

    Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the best of luck

    Karen

  • Virgoan
    August 14, 2007

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    I like the plea made on this piece. The soundness is really awesome.

    Keep writing my friend. Thanks for sharing.

    >>>VIRGOAN