Emptiness and limitation
Of something that does not exist.
Blue face, dark eyes, no inspiration.
The constant road and new fake twist.
Why can't you see my smiling face?
Why don't you know and never listen?
Maybe, i live this life with no grace,
But see my eyes - they always glisten.
No matter what, i'm happy that i am.
I keep my dreams more higher than some sorrow,
When everyone begin to blame and damn.
I know, that i'm right, and that - i follow.
Injustice and imperfection
Of this pathetic crowded cold.
Where many people move in a wrong direction.
Losing their hopes and lifetime gold.
A contest entry
- Let Your Imagination Run Free #17 (Picture Contest) by Aussie Gypsy.
450 points, ended August 21, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"Injustice and imperfection
Of this pathetic crowded cold.
Where many people move in a wrong direction.
Losing their hopes and lifetime gold."
Poetry at it's best! I love this it really makes you think. The emotions are there...it's just a great poem to read
I really enjoyed this and it made me think...and not many poems do that for me but I love it when they do, so thank you for that. Yet again, great write!
Izzy.
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"Injustice and imperfection
Of this pathetic crowded cold.
Where many people move in a wrong direction.
Losing their hopes and lifetime gold."
Very thoughtful piece.
Not following the 'crowd', thinking for yourself, and staying true to oneself is always important. Great write!
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this is great I love the feelings of the full emotions that you have painted here for all to read.
Riftkin -
This is a wonderful piece, full of hope and emotion, well done on this piece
Thank you for taking the time to enter this contest, I wish you the best of luck
Karen
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