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That Night

How on earth was i to know,
shadows followed my reason and
that night
i just might not have been
thinking right.

no, we didn't have a fight
not that night anyway,
no, things were sweet
because
i'd found his gun that night.

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  • HeavenScent4U
    September 24, 2007

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    ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i guess that would be pretty badass best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed


  • Vampstress
    August 3, 2007

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    Very nice I really liked this. Some nice lines too. Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest.
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